🐈
» Forums » Agencies » How does my submitted proposal look on the cl...
Page options
Anton's avatar
Anton T Community Member

How does my submitted proposal look on the client's side?

Hi there!

I'm facing an issue: I'm unsure how to craft a compelling proposal without understanding how the client perceives it. I'm unaware of which profile they view when I send as an agency, mine or someone else's, should I write "me' or "she". Does anyone know how I can preview my proposal before submitting? Thanks in advance!
 
 
3 REPLIES 3
Prince Pal's avatar
Prince Pal S Community Member

If you are sending a proposal under agency my suggestions are - 

  • Introduce your role in the company
  • Introduce the person under whom you are sending the proposal
  • You can not preview the proposal, review it carefully before submitting it

I hope this will help you.

Anton's avatar
Anton T Community Member

Thank you for your reply, Prince Pal S. This question is still unsolved:

"I'm unaware of which profile they view when I send as an agency, mine or someone else's, should I write "me' or "she""
Should I write:

"Hi, I'm Anton, we are an "Agency" and here is Sveta, she's an expert"
or
"Hi, we are an "Agency", and we have an expert for your needs"
or
"Hi I'm Sveta, I'm an expert"

It's weird if I write "Hi I'm Anton" but the client sees Sveta's profile.
It's weird if I write "Hi I'm Sveta" but the client sees my profile as well.
It's weird if I ask client whose profile does he see

Have no idea how to write competitive proposal as an angency.

Hey UpWork team, you have an option "View profile as a client", why don't you make same thing for proposals?

Thanks,
Regards,
Anton

Anton's avatar
Anton T Community Member

Here is what gpt said:

If the proposal is sent from the profile of "Freelancer2" under the Agency1 umbrella, the client will primarily see the profile and information of Freelancer2. The proposal will appear to come from the Freelancer2 profile within the Agency1 context.

The client will see the information provided in Freelancer2's Upwork profile, including their bio, skills, work history, portfolio items (if shared), job success score (if applicable), and any other details that Freelancer2 has made public on their Upwork profile.

However, the proposal message itself can be crafted to represent both Freelancer1 and Freelancer2, mentioning their combined skills and the collaborative efforts of Agency1, even if the proposal is technically sent from Freelancer2's profile within the agency.

Seems to be clear, hope he's right