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alinegm_92
Community Member

help me make my first job as an interior designers

 have made my account on upwork for a year and I adjusted my profile but i didn't make my first job yet i want some advise on how to gain my first job on this platform ?
thank you I f you can have a look on my profil and tell me what is messing I will be more than thankfull  

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m_terrazas
Community Member

Your profile is set to private. We can't see it.

it deosn't wan to set to pubic cloud you guid me upwork visibility .png

It tells you that it is private for not having income in a while.
Well, you write to CS and ask them to make it public. They can still help you.

Hi Ali,

 

I've set your profile visibility to public for you.


~ AJ
Upwork

thank you so much 

m_terrazas
Community Member

Good, now we can see it.
1- You waste the first two lines introducing yourself saying where you are from and what you do. That can already be seen by the client.
2- If I were the client and had to read such a wall of text, I'm sorry, but I would move on to the next candidate.
3- You just talk and talk about yourself, giving information that doesn't seem relevant to me. Tell the customer how you can help them, don't give them a lesson in your specialty.
4- It is a matter of taste, but the emojis seem horrible to me.
5- Write in separate paragraphs, it is easier to read. Don't go much beyond 4 paragraphs.
6- You are using the same bunch of letters in the specialized profiles. These are to describe a specific specialty. Using the same texts in all of them gives a feeling of neglect. Strive in each of them.
7- The descriptions in your portfolio. They are also very dense and too "flowery". Once again, it's talking about you. Explain in a few words what you have done and why.

 

I leave these posts to help you.
- https://community.upwork.com/t5/Freelancers/To-all-freelancers-looking-for-help/m-p/1230482#M734358

- https://community.upwork.com/t5/Community-Blog/Top-Red-Flags-for-Scams-From-Community-Member-Wes-C/b...

11ebf990
Community Member

Make your payment of $5 an I will refer you to my clients

But what are you saying?
Are you asking for payment for referring freelancers to clients?
The best thing you can do is create a proper profile. I don't know how far this has come to approve profiles like yours, and there are many, too many.

To your clients? )  Do you hide them at your pocket? )  Seems, you have none client yet...

May be, you want yourself to pay somebody $5 to refer clients to you? But I think, even $500 will not help...

alinegm_92
Community Member

thank you soo much I will change my bio and i really appreciate your feedback 

Good luck!

I applied what your have said and would like to take your feed back if possible. I really appreciate your help 

Now it's more readable, but you keep talking about yourself more than anything else. Plus you keep missing the first two lines with a greeting.
You should use them to get the attention of customers and make them open your profile.
For me it is still too bulky, too much information, I think.
In addition, you are using the same text for the main profile and the specialized one. It gives a feeling of neglect.
But, this is just my opinion. Perhaps you can ask for other opinions in the threads that are already created for this.
Ditch the salutation anyway, and write something attention-grabbing in those first two lines.

 

ETA- I forgot, is it written with AI? Because it is what it seems.

I thank your for your feedback, I used your advice and improved my bio could you tell me if it requires an improvmen. I really appreciate your advice.
 actually  I used Ai to be honest to help me write my bio 

Well, that explains a few things.


Once again you lose the first two lines.
Delete the first two, it is not necessary to greet or head each paragraph.
Start the presentation with the paragraph of: "Are you ready to transform your space into a work of art?"

 

The rest, I tell you the same thing again. It's a lot of text and it sounds like what it is, AI generated text. "Perfect", "cold" and "long".

 

I don't know why you want to give so many explanations. You have to try to tell the client how you can help him achieve his goal, but without boring him.

 

Try thinking like a customer. What would you like to read in a profile? A text telling me things that are too explained or a light text where the freelancer makes it clear that he can help me?

But once again. If I were you, I would not focus only on the opinion that I give you. I would ask for other opinions in the threads that already exist.


Possibly one or two will appear that what they will tell you is to add skills and a video, change your title and leave the presentation in X paragraphs. They are people who answer the same thing over and over again.
If you're lucky, someone might show up who's really interested in giving a real opinion.

 

And work the texts of each profile separately. Now they are still a copy.

Let you use AI always. No sense to talk anything and anywhere without... 

Also, you can present this "person" (Ai) to your wife instead yourself... )

Hello Maria, 

I sorry but can u see my profile too 

I'd like to see what's ur opinion 

And I'll be thankful ๐Ÿ™ 

I am going to refer you to the answers I gave to @Ali N.
From my answer in which I leave you two links. Read them, everything, links included.
And for you specifically, in addition to correcting the presentation, where is your portfolio?

22f084bd
Community Member

hi i made my profile from saveral months but i could not get any job yet what should i do? also i made project catalog which is still under review from last 7 days!!!!!