I hope this message finds you well. I'm facing a challenge and would greatly appreciate your valuable suggestions. Over the past three days, I've been noticing an increase in profile views; however, I haven't received any job invites yet. I'm reaching out to seek guidance on identifying any areas where I might be missing out.
Could anyone kindly review my profile and provide suggestions for any necessary changes? Rest assured, my profile is fully completed, with all relevant information provided.
I sincerely appreciate your time and assistance. Thank you in advance for your support.
It usually takes a lot of proposals to get one job. As you build a client base, you'll get repeat busines.
Simplify your profile. You are repeating info from your header. Clients only care about one thing. How are you going to help them reach their goals? You are either the best match in the sea of applications they receive, or you aren't. End of story.
Your job in your proposals, and your profile is to convince clients that you are what they are looking for. Keep it short and sweet.