Hello Hana and welcome to upwork.
1. You should put your rate higher than what you got now as its very low.
2. Write your profile a little more explanatory instead of trying to "sell your self" immediately as it can be a little boring to read for the client due to reading through more than just one profile looking for their freelancer.
Other than that you can always check out this page for a lot of good tips and trick on how to get across as you wish to the community,
Hope this was to any help for you and have a great day!