Upwork - Video - Reviews

[jjd2020]

Hey all,

I've made a video for upwork (and did all my own editing). 

Can I please have a few of you seasoned pros on here on how I can improve it?

https://youtu.be/zuiPacgZj5g

here's my profile - https://www.upwork.com/fl/jonathanjacob8 

Thank you.

Jonathan (JJ)