Want to score my first job

[#1]

Hello,

I am new freelancer and trying to acheive my first job but still not hired. Please check my profile and suggest me what is missing which need to improve for me. Your recommendations will be highly appreciated.

[#2]

Hi Arsalan Ali,

It can a while before you can win jobs, but do not give up and continue to do your best in submitting proposals to jobs. You may want to also consider reading the following resources to help you build your profile and write winning proposals to have a higher chance of getting noticed by clients:

Enhance Your Freelancer Profile for Greater Success

8+ Tips to Help You Create a Profile That Stands Out

How to Create a Proposal that Wins Jobs 

Craft an Eye-catching Proposal Every Time

Please also check out the freelancer resources for more helpful tips!

[#3]

OK, here are some tips.

First, remove meta-text, e.g. "Welcome to my profile!"

Everyone knows it's your profile. The first sentence should catch the client's attention and tell something relevant about you.

Second, try to talk about your clients too. Who are they, specifically? Right now, your profile is all about you. And it looks like just a list like so many other profiles.

It will be hard to differentiate.