Want your honest reviews about my profile

[#1]

hi 

I want to improve my profile presence. need some help from experts to check out my profile if you feel any kind of problem in my profile honestly tell me I want to improve my profile and become Profesional 

I do possible changes according to  your suggestions

          Thanks in Advance 

[#2]

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But this article may help you a lot.

[#3]

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