Can I get profile feedback

[#1]

Hello everyone 👋🏻

Would you mind taking a few moments to review my profile?

[#2]

Lahcen,

"I am an expert SEO Management operative with ____________ years of experience, who trained at _____________________ and worked at ________________ in order to refine my ability to help you establish your online presence."

Start with that. No "Hi there!" Just start right there. Then write about some of you work experiences. If you've been doing this for four plus years, you should have more to say than "(I even worked for a football club!)"

It's great that you worked for a football club. It's great that you were excited by that. But it sounds like that's the only job you had. Write about two or three more ... make it sound like you know what you are doing. How did you help thet football club? What other clients have you had and how did you help them?

You need .... MORE.  People need more information to understand who you are and to decide whether or not to trust you.

This is all about trust and ... ("I even worked for a football club!") does not establish a lot of trust. It's a start, but it's not enough.

Good luck.

[#3]

Thank you so much