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Moemen A Community Member

Feed back on my profile

Hi, I Hope you are doing well ^ ^

I would appreciate it if any expert could take a look at my Profile page and let me know how to improve it my specialty is game artist (animation)
https://www.upwork.com/fl/~015f39c928d794cac4?mp_source=share
Thanks in advance. 

Best Regard 
Moemen Zaki

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Anthony H Community Member

Moe,

Your profile starts with a few things you do not need. 

You start with this:

 

"Are you looking for game character cycle animations for your RPG Games (swords, bows, staff, etc) Or are you looking to make an excellent cartoon movie, whether a comedy or an action movie? then you came to the right place. My name is Moemen"

 

All of that is unnecessary. People already know why they are looking at your profile. You don't have to tell them all that and your name is already in bold letters at the top of the profile. So all that is unnecessary. Further, clients often are fed the first 200 characters of your profile and as it is now your first 200 characters are not very convincing.

You should start with "I am an expert game detail animator, who can ...._____________________________" 


That's how you should start ... or something close to that.

Good luck.

 

 

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Anthony's avatar
Anthony H Community Member

Moe,

Your profile starts with a few things you do not need. 

You start with this:

 

"Are you looking for game character cycle animations for your RPG Games (swords, bows, staff, etc) Or are you looking to make an excellent cartoon movie, whether a comedy or an action movie? then you came to the right place. My name is Moemen"

 

All of that is unnecessary. People already know why they are looking at your profile. You don't have to tell them all that and your name is already in bold letters at the top of the profile. So all that is unnecessary. Further, clients often are fed the first 200 characters of your profile and as it is now your first 200 characters are not very convincing.

You should start with "I am an expert game detail animator, who can ...._____________________________" 


That's how you should start ... or something close to that.

Good luck.