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Donald B Community Member

Kindly help review my Profile

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Anthony H Community Member

Donald,

 

1. Delete your first sentence or two and start your profile here:

 

 I turn architectural blueprints into stunning 3D visual experiences, bridging the gap between ideas and reality. Whether it’s a modern office, a serene home, or a historic restoration, I create vivid, lifelike renderings that ensure every detail aligns with your vision.

 

2. Then take out all the flashy-looking icons that make you look unprofessional.

 

3. Then include all this information ... "Experience and Education With over 5 years in architectural visualization and a solid architectural education, I'm well-versed in reading architectural drawings and adapting to various design styles. Wide-Ranging Skill Set:  Interior Visualizations, 3D Rendering, Photorealistic Rendering, Exterior Visualizations, Architectural Visualization for Real Estate market, Landscape Visualizations, Landscape Design, Product Visualizations, Furniture Modelling & Rendering, Post-Production and Edition, VR 360° Panorama"

 

But do it WITHOUT USING LISTS. 

 

Write all that information into a nice narrative. "I have five years experience in architectual visualization and a solid educational back ground FROM ___________________________ University. I am well-versed in deciphering architectual renderings and use a wide range of styles to accomodate your various interests. I am experienced in interior and exterior renderings and the use of photorealistic imagery ..."

 

Get the idea? Use your own words, not mine ... and try to include all that nice information ... BUT NO LISTS.

 

Why? Because nobody reads lists. Do you? I don't. Nobody does.

 

You can have one short list at the end ... but that's the limit. 

If you do this, people will actually read your profile. Also, writing a narrative (instead of a lists) makes people slow down. You want people to spend time reading your profile. It gives them the sense that they are more familiar with you -- more comfortable with you. People hire people they feel comfortable with. Lists do not draw people in. Narratives do.

Good luck.

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Donald B Community Member

Hello Anthony,

 

Thanks for the comment, I ahve implemeted all you said and looking forward to a good result. 

 

If you don't mind can you review my proposal as well, I boost and I normally get views but not message.

 

Proposal