Assad,
There is nothing wrong with your profile except one thing, which is that it is not technically a profile at all.
What you have is an advertisement. A profile is a narrative that discusses your background related to the service you are offering. Your write-up, which looks AI-generated to me, only claims you are good at marketing. It does not discuss your background in a manner that would convince me that what you say is true.
A profile would be something like, "I am an expert marketer who studied at _______________ and worked for ______________ for many years until I got to be an expert. My skill set can help your company _____________________ ...."
That would be how a profile is written.
Anyway, I have seen advertisement-oriented, AI generated write-ups that do pretty well. Keep what you've got for a month or two and see what happens. You can change it later, if you need to.
Good luck.
