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Asad A Community Member

Please show some support by giving profile feedback

I am new to upwork. Please take a look at my profile and leave a feedback. 
https://www.upwork.com/freelancers/~0195e5131347109294

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Anthony H Community Member

Assad,

There is nothing wrong with your profile except one thing, which is that it is not technically a profile at all.

What you have is an advertisement. A profile is a narrative that discusses your background related to the service you are offering. Your write-up, which looks AI-generated to me, only claims you are good at marketing. It does not discuss your background in a manner that would convince me that what you say is true.

A profile would be something like, "I am an expert marketer who studied at _______________ and worked for ______________ for many years until I got to be an expert. My skill set can help your company _____________________ ...."

That would be how a profile is written.

Anyway, I have seen advertisement-oriented, AI generated write-ups that do pretty well. Keep what you've got for a month or two and see what happens. You can change it later, if you need to.

Good luck.

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Anthony H Community Member

Assad,

There is nothing wrong with your profile except one thing, which is that it is not technically a profile at all.

What you have is an advertisement. A profile is a narrative that discusses your background related to the service you are offering. Your write-up, which looks AI-generated to me, only claims you are good at marketing. It does not discuss your background in a manner that would convince me that what you say is true.

A profile would be something like, "I am an expert marketer who studied at _______________ and worked for ______________ for many years until I got to be an expert. My skill set can help your company _____________________ ...."

That would be how a profile is written.

Anyway, I have seen advertisement-oriented, AI generated write-ups that do pretty well. Keep what you've got for a month or two and see what happens. You can change it later, if you need to.

Good luck.

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Asad A Community Member

Thanks a lot for your feedback. It really means a lot. I will try to apply the recommendations you have given and will see how thing go. Thanks again for your positive feedback