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Please visit My Profile And Give Me a Feedback

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Hi Shara,

Overall, I think your profile looks good. Here are a few suggestions to improve your profile:

1) Add spaces between letters and commas in your title; this will make your title easier to read. Or use the pipe symbol (vertical bar) instead of commas: China Sourcing | Dropshipping | Amazon FBA | Supplier Search |Purchasing

2) There are a few grammatical corrections needed at the beginning of your overview/summary. Remove this: "Hey! I'm Shara:)" and correct the errors like this:

I have established deep collaborations with 2000+ factories in China and numerous overseas dropshippers/retailers. With 5+ years of experience in supply chain, e-commerce, marketing, and dropshipping sales, I know which products and suppliers are the best for you. My success is based on several sourcing cases and I will share my real experience and insights with you! Let me help you to win from the competition!

The other sections of your profile look great.

Good luck!