Aug 11, 2024 08:41:35 PM by Shara O
Aug 12, 2024 02:56:34 PM by Clark S
Hi Shara,
Overall, I think your profile looks good. Here are a few suggestions to improve your profile:
1) Add spaces between letters and commas in your title; this will make your title easier to read. Or use the pipe symbol (vertical bar) instead of commas: China Sourcing | Dropshipping | Amazon FBA | Supplier Search |Purchasing
2) There are a few grammatical corrections needed at the beginning of your overview/summary. Remove this: "Hey! I'm Shara:)" and correct the errors like this:
I have established deep collaborations with 2000+ factories in China and numerous overseas dropshippers/retailers. With 5+ years of experience in supply chain, e-commerce, marketing, and dropshipping sales, I know which products and suppliers are the best for you. My success is based on several sourcing cases and I will share my real experience and insights with you! Let me help you to win from the competition! |
The other sections of your profile look great.
Good luck!