Please visit My Profile And Give Me a Feedback

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Please visit My Profile And Give Me a Feedback

[celgins]

Elle,

Good information in your profile. I suggest only two small changes:

1) Add spacing between commas and letters in your title. I recommend: China Dropshipping Agent | Sourcing, Quality Inspection, Supplier Search

2) I recommend removing this: "Hello, I'm Elle, a native Chinese" from your overview/summary. Why? Because when clients search for freelancers, only the first 200-225 characters of your summary are shown. This means you have very little space (approximately two short sentences) to get their attention. You want clients to see their goals (your services and results) in this small space--not greetings, names or repeated words.

The other areas of your profile look good.

Good luck!

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thank you so much