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Rohan P Community Member

Profile Feedback required from community

Hello all,

 

https://www.upwork.com/fl/~01531609fa743ec86d?mp_source=share

 

I will appriciate your effort if you can review my profile and suggest me improvement to win client.

 

Regards,

Rohan

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Clark's avatar
Clark S Community Member

Hello Rohan,

 

Overall, I think your profile looks good.

 

The first part of your overview/summary focuses on technologies and skills which may or may not be beneficial to clients. The clients who are completely familiar with .NET development may look for this information, but those not as familiar will likely want to know specifically what you can build, or which problems you can solve. For example, I recommend the following be moved to the top:

 

Expert level ability to work with different .net projects with repository, mediator patterns and agile scrum methodologies. I pride myself in my ability to intuitively gather, interpret and understand your requirements, as well as develop high level .net project with standard coding guidelines.

 

The reason is because it tells clients how you can help them. Clients want to know about your skills and experience, but they really want to know how hiring you will benefit them, and this paragraph helps them understand that a little better.

 

Also, correct the spelling of the title for the third item in your portfolio: Data Scarping  Scraping

 

I think the other sections of your profile look good.

 

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Clark's avatar
Clark S Community Member

Hello Rohan,

 

Overall, I think your profile looks good.

 

The first part of your overview/summary focuses on technologies and skills which may or may not be beneficial to clients. The clients who are completely familiar with .NET development may look for this information, but those not as familiar will likely want to know specifically what you can build, or which problems you can solve. For example, I recommend the following be moved to the top:

 

Expert level ability to work with different .net projects with repository, mediator patterns and agile scrum methodologies. I pride myself in my ability to intuitively gather, interpret and understand your requirements, as well as develop high level .net project with standard coding guidelines.

 

The reason is because it tells clients how you can help them. Clients want to know about your skills and experience, but they really want to know how hiring you will benefit them, and this paragraph helps them understand that a little better.

 

Also, correct the spelling of the title for the third item in your portfolio: Data Scarping  Scraping

 

I think the other sections of your profile look good.

 

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Rohan P Community Member

Thank you Clark for your feedback.
I will update as per your suggestion.