Profile Review request!

[#1]

Thanks for stoping by! I wouild appreciate a profile review to understand what can i do better to improve my profile here at Upwork.

Im a Senior corporate training manager (BPO) transitoning to Instructional design.

Link: https://www.upwork.com/freelancers/~01361d4938a9a7afff?mp_source=share

Much appreciated!

[#2]

Jorge,

I don't see anything wrong with your profile, except that I didn't understand it.

Don't take that to heart. I just think one or two specific examples somewhere near the top would help explain what you do a bit better.

Try to be specific and avoid heavy use of industry jargon ...

Now, that's advise from someone who is decidedly not knowledgeable about your market. So, if I'm maybe you've got this right and I'm coming out of left field. You certainly write well -- so I'm just advising you as an editor would, which is to point out that some people will be baffled ... while others certainly won't be.

Good luck. It sounds like you're a total pro at your work. I don't want to sound like a fortune cookie, but Upwork could work out well for you.