Kemraj,
Your goal might be to train your students to think ambitiously (and I like the way that sounds), but your students's goal and their partents' goal is to get them through math class. Or English class. Or social studies.
I think it would help if you said this right away. (What are you waiting for?) As such, your first sentence should be,
"I am a tutor of primary and middle-school students who can help them through subjects such as math, English, social studies, and history."
That sounds more like what your clients want to hear.
You should also put the word "tutor" in your working title. You are trying to sound impressive, but you have to be very clear. Clients looking for a tutor will be dashing along pretty quickly. You need to use the keywords that will stop them in their tracks.
I think you should specify all the courses you can manage -- math, English, history, reading, whatever -- because students in trouble in one of those subjects will want to see those keywords.
I also think you should explain how you intend to tutor students remotely. Do you plan on using some form of Zoom or Skype? Don't you think it would be something the parents or students would want to know?
Good luck. You've got a good start there.
Also, raise your rates, for crying out loud.
