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Bryan O Community Member

Profile optimization

Pls I need a profile feedback as soon as possible 

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Anthony H Community Member

Bryan,


Your profile should be grammatically correct and your working title, "Content Writer, Article Writer and Creative," is already incorrect in terms of grammar. "Content Writer" is a job title.. "Article Writer" is a job title. And "Creative" is an adjective. So your title is out of balance. That said, "Content Writer" and "Article Writer" is, essentially, the same thing, so it sounds odd that you would repeat the same job title. Once is enough.

 

After that, one of the ways I look at profiles is to see if they provide information to clients that they could use to make a decision on whether or not to hire you.

 

Your first sentence is "Need content for your social media, website, or business?"

 

You can see there is no information in that sentence; it is simply a rhetorical question. So, since it does not provide information that clients need, it is a waste of their time to read it. Clients need information -- how much writing have you done; how far did you get in school; what topics are you familiar with; are you available for quick turnover work; do you understand SEO writing; are you good at doing research; do you have interviewing skills ....

 

Those are the types of things clients want to know if they are going to hire a writer. They do not need rhetorical questions. So, your first sentence should be deleted.

 

Then, your write up gets good. " I am your one-stop-shop for quality, fast, and dependable writing services."

 

Don't you agee? That is informative. Those are the types of things people who hire writers need to know.

Then, "H
ello there, I'm Bryan Osas."

 

That sentence is not helpful. Take it out. You don't need to say "hello there," and your name is already in bold letters at the top of your profile. So take out "Hello there. I'm Bryan Osas."

 

Then your write-up gets back on track. "I'm an Article and Blog Content Writer, with nearly 2 years of experience. I also engage in Creative Writing. I ensure the fulfillment of every requirement set by a client. This is in addition to being able to handle 1,000-5,000 article words per week depending on the requirements. I am ready to work within your budget and will be open to negotiations on what you are willing to pay. I'm well versed on several content writing aspects . These include the following offerings: 🖤 Article writing/rewriting (following SEO guidelines, formatting, use of images, editing/proofreading, eliminating fluff, addition to word count, writing for various niches). 🖤 Social media posts and captions (humor writing, creative writing, etc.) 🖤 Partnering with writing agencies (e.g., team projects) 🖤 Ebook development 🖤 Short academic papers (qualitative research, internet research, etc.) 🖤 Guides (travel, shopping, how-tos, etc.) Rest assured that I write 100% original content with or without extensive internet research and AI tools. I could also make use of AI apps like ChatGPT, Bard, and so on if the job description requires me to do so. And, of course, I'm all about communication. I'm clear and concise, open to feedback, and quick to respond to meet your specific needs and exacting requirements without any delay. Click hire now and let's get started on your project. "

 

All of that is great. That's exactly what people hiring writers want to know. 

You only have to change your working title and take out a few bits you don't need in your write-up and your profile will be vastly improved.

Good luck.

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