Request for Profile Review

[#1]

Hello everyone!

I would really appreciate it if someone could take a look at my profile and provide me with a detailed review. Specifically, I'd like feedback on the following:

1. Is my bio clear, engaging, and professional, or are there any changes I should make?
2. Does my portfolio accurately represent my skills and experience, or should I improve it?
3. Any additional tips or suggestions on how I can enhance my profile to make it stand out even more?

Your input would be invaluable in helping me refine my profile. Thank you in advance for your time and insights!

[#2]

Wishma,

Your profile is solid. There are no holes in it. But it's a missed opportunity. It doesn't let us know who you are.

You don't need to write your autobiography, but what you've written is fairly generic.

What you have is focused, which is great. I would suggest you put in a sentence or two about your training and two or three sentences about previous work you've done. This gives more depth to your write-up. And you don't have to write it in a copywriter style. Every sentence does not have to be glossy. Just simple stuff ... "My love of fashion started when I was drawing as a youngster, which led to art classes at _______________ College ..." Just a few sentences with that kind of details would give you more depth.

My criteria for a great profile is -- establish your expertise immediately. Then back that up with a description of your background and work experiences. Be friendly, confident and present your expertise with as much range as you can muster. (You might mention other applications -- book coverss, posters, wedding invitations, other areas where you might find work.

So, you're almost there. My last measure is to see if the profile sets you apart from the competition. I think your level of professionalism already sets you apart ... and I have not seen very many fashion designers come through this forum, so you might be safe.

One way to sound different from the competion is to invent a specialty. "My specialty is formal evening wear ... " Just having a specialty makes you sound accomplished and experienced and, well, it makes you sound special. So, if you can conjure up a specialty that can help make you sound more impressive.

Again ... your profile without changes is solid. It's quite good and it maybe all you need.

Good luck.

[#3]

Hi, Wishma!

Thank you so much for contacting me at our Upwork community platform, You
don't know about your eligibility and your humanity..! I really wondered
and heartily appreciated your magical blog writing about me. I think
everyone has achieved his special things which are God gifted to him, not
only about me this is my observational opinion. If you agree with me or
not, never mind.

I didn't think about that, what you know about my profile, I thought only,
I should get my best, It had been shining among those community members who
have worked with me and to our genuine clients afterall we are service
providers in this market place..! It doesn't matter, Who has been what he
thinks about me, It should wrong those people, who didn't shine among them,
be wrong? I thought, only doing my best and getting satisfied with those
who have requirements, who have known that ability.

I am glad to meet and contact you at this forum, you know, Wishma, you are
a really magical blog/ copywriter, you have tried to do something different
and big things. I mean, story/ blog/ writeup or filmi story.


Thanks again!