Review my profile (Java Spring Boot Developer)

[#1]

Hello Upwork community, as a newcomer to the platform, I would greatly appreciate your feedback on my profile. Please let me know which areas could use improvement.

Here is the link to my profile: https://www.upwork.com/freelancers/~0107ca987a7a0b79e8

Thank you for the help,

Tewodros

[#2]

Tewodros,

Your write-up has lots of terrific details that tell me you know what you are doing. Good job.

Just so you know, clients do not hire you because you are passionate about your work. They hire you because you know what you are doing and can bring them results. I would take out that sentence about your passionate approach to the work. It doesn't help you very much. It even seems like a distraction.

Good luck.