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Rahal R Community Member

please rearview my profile and give me some tips to improve it

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Anthony H Community Member

Rahal,

I'm sorry to tell you this, Rahal, but what you have is not a profile. It's an advertisement.

A profile tells us something about the person. Where did you learn your craft? What success have you had that shows us you can do the job?

 

What you have is an advertisement. And adversistment says, "We're the best at this in the world and we never let you down."

 

In so many words, advertisements are just lofty promises without any substance. And, they make you sound exactly like everyone else.

You can start from scratch and write a profile that shows how you are different from everybody else or you can stick with an advertisement that sounds exactly like everybody else. It's up to you.

Good luck.

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Rahal R Community Member

Thank you very much for your valuable advice, Anthony. I will use your advise to level up my profile.