Critique my profile

[connie_love]

Hello, I was hoping to get feedback on my profile. I have been unsuccessful with landing any jobs. Thank you for your time.

[65dab6ce]

Hi Renee, hang in there!

The only thing I would suggest would be to focus on the specific services you can offer that clients are actively searching for.

You could put that in bullet point format so it's easily scannable when clients are looking at your profile.

e.g. 

• Blog writing
• Healthcare training content
• Ebook writing  
• Website content for healthcare coaches etc

Something like that. Hope this helps.

All the best!

[connie_love]

Thank you for the tips. I updated my profile.

[robin_hyman]

* Remove "hello" from the first line.  It's a space waster

* Change "Nurse Content Writer" to "Medical Content Writer" or "Health Content Writer".  I don't find "nurse" content often or ever.  I do read about medical or health content.

Clients only see the first 2-3 lines of your profile in a search.  Make sure they stand out!

Good luck.

[martina_plaschka]

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Renee W wrote:

Hello, I was hoping to get feedback on my profile. I have been unsuccessful with landing any jobs. Thank you for your time.

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Looks really good! Stay with it, and you will soon find your first client of many!