Do you want help for first job and Project quickly

[655be748]

If you required help getting your first project, I am here to help you out ❤️.

[e715cf23]

Hi Faraz, I would love if you can help with some tips.

[m_terrazas]

Overall, apart from the emojis, I think it's not bad.
The only thing I would tell you is to delete the first line in both profiles, it's a repetition of the title and you're wasting the first two lines. These are the only thing the client sees without opening your profile, so they are important.

[1e1dfc91]

Hi Maria 

Good day

Plz can you be my mentor or someone to teach the everything I need to know?

Basically,I will be honest with you that I know absolutely nothing about this business but with the help from someone like you? I belief I can do more.

Also,I am a quick learner

So I will pick you really fast,that's for sure.

As a way to say thank you 

I will not mind sharing 40% of my first deal with you ma'am,plz🙏.

**Edited for Community Guidelines**

[655be748]

Hi Earnest,

To make your profile more appealing to potential clients and businesses, we suggest a few key changes:

1. Skills Section: Consider listing your skill sets in bullet points in the first paragraph for easier readability.
2. Portfolio: Add portfolio items to showcase your previous work.
3. Experience and Certifications: Include any relevant experience, skills, certifications, and licenses you have to highlight your qualifications.

@Maria T, could you please assist Earnest further with these enhancements?

Regards,

Faraz

[655be748]

Maria T can you further guide Earnest S as your experience.

[655be748]

Dear Paul,

Welcome to the platform! It's a great place for beginners. I reviewed your profile and found it attractive, with some key areas of interest. Please check the private comments I have shared for some improvement as suggested.

Best regards,

[efcdcf86]

Please can you check on my profile to see if it is okay.

thank you

[13248a6f]

hi Faraz,

Thank you so much for your kind offer to help! I would greatly appreciate any guidance or tips you can provide to help me secure my first job on Upwork. Your support means a lot to me.

[m_terrazas]

I'll tell you the same thing as Paul, use the first two lines to get the customer's attention. It's the only thing they see without opening the profile.
Now they would only see "4+ years of Experience  / 100% customer satisfaction" and little else.

[m_terrazas]

Faraz, if you are offering help you should give it, not just give a positive vote.

[6a9c1e06]

hi, am new here. help would be great...(-;

[m_terrazas]

In addition to what I have said to the others, I think you talk too much about yourself and little about what you can do for your clients.

[655be748]

Dear Jasel E,

To make your profile more attractive to potential clients, consider adding a portfolio showcasing your work, along with certifications and snapshots of your previous experiences.

Best regards,

[elisa_b]

I am wondering if his suggestions would help him too.

[655be748]

Dear Maria,

Thank you for your valuable suggestions and insights. I apologize for my delayed response; I was unavailable due to the recent passing of my brother-in-law.

[m_terrazas]

I'm sorry.

[655be748]

Thanks Maria T:

[655be748]

Sure Maria T:

[0f80d52b]

Yes please! It would be great if you could help.

[m_terrazas]

Your profile is private, we can't see it.

[655be748]

Dear Ambik:

Your profile is private, make it public so that we can guide you accordingly.

Regards.

[fd9c42a0]

Thank you, I would love to hear suggestions and tips.

[m_terrazas]

Your profile is private, we can't see it.

[655be748]

Dear Eleonor A:

Please make your profile public, so that we can provide you any suggestion, etc.