Jul 20, 2024 06:42:34 PM by Faraz A
If you required help getting your first project, I am here to help you out ❤️.
Jul 26, 2024 12:14:37 PM by Maria T
Overall, apart from the emojis, I think it's not bad.
The only thing I would tell you is to delete the first line in both profiles, it's a repetition of the title and you're wasting the first two lines. These are the only thing the client sees without opening your profile, so they are important.
Aug 2, 2024 05:30:28 AM Edited Aug 4, 2024 11:32:32 PM by Pradeep H
Hi Maria
Good day
Plz can you be my mentor or someone to teach the everything I need to know?
Basically,I will be honest with you that I know absolutely nothing about this business but with the help from someone like you? I belief I can do more.
Also,I am a quick learner
So I will pick you really fast,that's for sure.
As a way to say thank you
I will not mind sharing 40% of my first deal with you ma'am,plz🙏.
**Edited for Community Guidelines**
Aug 19, 2024 09:59:13 AM by Faraz A
Hi Earnest,
To make your profile more appealing to potential clients and businesses, we suggest a few key changes:
@Maria T, could you please assist Earnest further with these enhancements?
Regards,
Faraz
Jul 29, 2024 06:40:46 AM by Faraz A
Dear Paul,
Welcome to the platform! It's a great place for beginners. I reviewed your profile and found it attractive, with some key areas of interest. Please check the private comments I have shared for some improvement as suggested.
Best regards,
Sep 3, 2024 07:51:23 AM by Muniratu I
Please can you check on my profile to see if it is okay.
thank you
Jul 22, 2024 02:06:57 AM by Hamza Ahmed S
hi Faraz,
Thank you so much for your kind offer to help! I would greatly appreciate any guidance or tips you can provide to help me secure my first job on Upwork. Your support means a lot to me.
Jul 26, 2024 12:18:27 PM Edited Jul 26, 2024 12:19:03 PM by Maria T
I'll tell you the same thing as Paul, use the first two lines to get the customer's attention. It's the only thing they see without opening the profile.
Now they would only see "4+ years of Experience / 100% customer satisfaction" and little else.
Jul 25, 2024 05:24:15 AM by Maria T
Faraz, if you are offering help you should give it, not just give a positive vote.
Jul 26, 2024 12:20:51 PM by Maria T
In addition to what I have said to the others, I think you talk too much about yourself and little about what you can do for your clients.
Jul 27, 2024 03:21:29 AM by Faraz A
Dear Jasel E,
To make your profile more attractive to potential clients, consider adding a portfolio showcasing your work, along with certifications and snapshots of your previous experiences.
Best regards,
Jul 26, 2024 01:43:41 PM by Faraz A
Dear Maria,
Thank you for your valuable suggestions and insights. I apologize for my delayed response; I was unavailable due to the recent passing of my brother-in-law.
Jul 27, 2024 02:26:11 AM Edited Jul 27, 2024 02:33:16 AM by Faraz A
Dear Ambik:
Your profile is private, make it public so that we can guide you accordingly.
Regards.
Jul 26, 2024 01:46:40 PM by Faraz A
Dear Eleonor A:
Please make your profile public, so that we can provide you any suggestion, etc.