Mahinoor,
You have probably noticed that I can be very picky. This is partly because your English could improve a little and I don't like to make changes without explaining why.
So: Stray thoughts: Your introductory video is very nice. I liked it. But it is long and it doesn't show off your skills at special effects and features very well. So keep it, but replace that with something shorter and fancier when you get a chance.
Your rate is too low. I understand this is done to attract the first couple of customers, but you could surely start at $15 per hour. It shows more confidence.
Your write up needs white space. It's too crowded together. You have to put in some space between paragraphs.
You should fix a few things. Don't use capital letters for TEXT and MY JOB. Write TEXT with a capital T to match your other listings and put MY JOB in lower case in italics. It will look better.
Write out Youtube ... instead of YT.
Erase this sentence: I have completed a professional video editing course from a local institution here in Dhaka.
Why do that? You are here as an expert. I am a writer. I don't say "I took a course in English grammar when I was young." That just looks odd. All video editors took a course somewhere, so just cross that sentence out. It looks childish.
Help full is one word: helpful.
Erase "Also Don't hesitate to knock me on inbox" Replace that with "Don't hesitate to get in touch."
Cross out the rest and replace it with "I'm always available to talk ... would love to hear more about your project. Thank you!"
OK, those are pretty picky items, but your profile is really fine. There's nothing wrong with it, but it will look more professional if you fix those little, nagging items.
So here is something that will really give you a boost: Cut and paste this and put it at the very top of your write up:
From an early Upwork review:
"Mahinoor was very diligent and professional, and made revisions without any trouble. I'd love to work with her again. Her video editing was top notch! Highly recommended!"
Cut and paste all that and put it up where everyone can see it. Put all of your write up below that. Why? There is nothing -- absolutely nothing -- that will bring in business more than a previous customer saying they would love to work with you again.
Hope that helps.
