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Michael J Community Member

Get Profile Feedback from Experienced Freelancers on Upwork

Hi Community!

 

Getting started on Upwork can take a lot of work and focus. To help make this process a little easier, we’ve created this post where you can request feedback on your profile. The community is full of experienced Upwork freelancers who are passionate about helping others. These users will review your profile and provide feedback based on their experience.

 

If you’re interested in requesting help, make sure your profile visibility is not set to “Private” and then reply below. 

 

We’re excited to see how Community members can continue to help each other to grow!

 

Note: A previous version of this post was as the number of responses made it difficult to read and navigate. If you had not received a response yet to a request you made, please post again in this thread.


Cheers,
Mike
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Michael J Community Member

Hi all,

 

This thread has been closed from further replies due to its size. We appreciate your participation in the Community and welcome you to continue the conversation here.


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Mike

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Kashif's avatar
Kashif S Community Member

Upwork academy courses are beneficial to enhance the profile visibility

kindly have a look at my profile https://www.upwork.com/freelancers/~01ea8f8840353f5f82 

thank, 

Zubair's avatar
Zubair N Community Member

Hello Delwar you are too good.

Saleem's avatar
Saleem Y Community Member
MD Arafath's avatar
MD Arafath K Community Member

Hello Hi IM Arafath

Aliah Shara Licel's avatar
Aliah Shara Licel J Community Member

Hello Sir, 

Would you please take a look at my profile and suggest some improvements? 

 

Julius's avatar
Julius O Community Member

Hey! Do you mind checking my profile?

MOSTAFIZUR RAHAMAN's avatar
MOSTAFIZUR RAHAMAN S Community Member

You should edit Your Description and Focus on the service mainly you are able to provide.

Babar's avatar
Babar A Community Member

Hello there I need help getting jobs.There is no view of my account.How can i improve,though I apply for jobs but not getting any wo

Ellie's avatar
Ellie G Community Member

Hello,

Kindly look at my profile and suggest how best to optimize it. Thank you fro your time

Mayur's avatar
Mayur S Community Member

Can you please check mine 

https://www.upwork.com/freelancers/~0162c7a1120768d190

Thanks,

Mayur

Anthony's avatar
Anthony H Community Member

Mayur,

Hard to say. I don't know what a stack developer does. Anyway, in your first sentence "wan" is not a word. You want "want to" not "wan."

 

At the bottom you want "speaks to," with an "s" at the end of speak(s).


Nigina's avatar
Nigina N Community Member

Hello Anthony.

Could you please check my profile? I have submitted some proposals but no answer. Maybe it is because I am new here. Or maybe there is smth wrong on my profile. 

Adam's avatar
Adam S Community Member

Hello Nigina,

 

When I reviewed your profile, my first impression was that you started each sentence with "I".  It's a very direct approach, though (in my opinion) you could change the structure a little and add more details.

 

For example.  Your profile currently says: "I am an experienced ESL teacher. I also have experience in managing and leading. My writing is perfect in Russian and English languages. I write resumes, letters, essays and articles fluently. I can edit English and Russian texts. I can use Microsoft office programs fluently."

 

Here are some areas that you could expand on to add more context to who you are and what you specialize in as well as why somebody might hire you.

  • How long have you been an ESL teacher?  How many years?
  • What type of managing and leading do you specifically have?
  • Do you have any certificates or writing examples you could share in your porfolio, such as examples of resumes, letters or essays?
  • When translating from English to Russian texts, do you have any examples of your work?  
  • Which Microsoft Office programs and versions are you most fluent with and how long have you been using them and for what reason or in what type of setting?

Those are just a few things I thought I might be able to help you out with.  I'm new here too and wish you the best of luck on your UpWork adventure.

 

Kindest Regards,

Adam

 

Vanshika's avatar
Vanshika C Community Member

Hello, I'm new to Upwork. Could you please help me go through my profile? I need your feedback. Thank you.

Joy's avatar
Joy o Community Member

Hello Adams

Please help me review my profile.

 

https://www.upwork.com/freelancers/~015e5104f884c4ceed

 

Adam's avatar
Adam S Community Member

Hello Joy,

 

I think you are off to a great start with your profile.  Something I would suggest is posting some examples of your work in your portfolio.   For example, if you have access to Instagram analytics, I would show a screenshot of the historical account activity before you worked with the client and mark when you started, and show the increase in the account's activity.

 

I would set your rate higher though I'm not sure what the competitive rate is for what you do.  You can always negotiate down though by charging more on your profile, you present yourself as if you have more experience and value to your time.

 

Also, I've copied your profile here with different lines highlighted and my suggestions below.

 

From your profile: https://www.upwork.com/freelancers/~015e5104f884c4ceed

  1. Quote of the day: Don't be tempted by low rates and lose your Instagram account.
  2. An experienced Instagram expert with 3+ years of experience in providing Instagram Follower Growth Campaign.
  3. A savvy Instagram manager specializing in Instagram Organic Growth, Engagement, and Page impression.
  4. I have helped several business owners/brands to build their Target followers, increase their engagements, and also connect them to more potential customers/clients without the use of any bot.
  5. I’m ready to grow your Instagram account!!! If you are looking for a highly skilled Instagram Expert to grow your Brand/Business, increase your potential Clients/Customers, and at the same increase engagement then you came to the right person. I can help you increase your audience and increase your engagement on Instagram, not just any audience but real and relevant followers and real comments from your target audience that are interested in your Instagram page.
  6. I can build your followers, likes & comments organically and very fast. With experience outside Upwork, I have been able to help small business owners/ personal brands to build up their real followers with their target and relevant audiences and at the same time increase engagement without attracting any ban or restriction to their account.
  7. I know the updated algorithm of Instagram and I put effort to follow them.
  8. Together with my strategies, I get a good result in the end. I don't deliver low-quality work, my results are top-quality services being rendered. I’m an honest, disciplined, hardworking, and goal-oriented individual. Quote of the day: Don't be tempted by low rates when you are looking for quality work. Send an invitation, and let's discuss this further.

My recommendations:

  1. Remove this line.  It adds no value to what you bring to a client.
  2. I would remove this line as it is better said in Line 3
  3. I would say "I am a savvy ..."
  4. Remove the capital 'T' in Target followers.  Make the last word plural: 'bots'.
  5. This is a great line.  I think you should have this as your first line in your profile as it sets a nice tone.
  6. I would remove the last part: without attracting any ban or restriction to their account.
  7. Maybe change this to "Rest assured that I'm an expert and embedded into the Instagram algorithm every day." or something like that.
  8. Remove "Together with my strategies, I get a good result in the end. I don't deliver low-quality work, my results are top-quality services being rendered." and the ending 'Quote of the day' piece.  

 

Please take my feedback with kindness as I am only trying to help you to find success with my suggestions above.  I think you have a great profile though some minor changes could help you out.  The big thing would be providing some screenshots of work you've done.   You can blur out the client's name if that is a concern.

 

I hope this feedback helped.

Adam

Gladys's avatar
Gladys I Community Member

Hello Adam S, 

I like the way you review profiles. Please I'm new here kindly review my profile. Thank you. 

Muhammad's avatar
Muhammad U Community Member

Hello Adam,

Can you please review my profile?

https://www.upwork.com/fl/usmanusman29

 

regards

Usman...

Nguyen Quang's avatar
Nguyen Quang H Community Member

Hi Adam S,

Please help me review my profile and suggest some improvements.

https://www.upwork.com/freelancers/~0124801cb1ac6a051c

Thanks you!

 

 

Mohamed's avatar
Mohamed S Community Member

Hi Adam,

Hope every thing goes well.

May you  take a look at my profile and suggest some improvements please ?

https://www.upwork.com/fl/~01708e0e29f1a6f4ca

Regards.

Vlad's avatar
Vlad H Community Member

Hi Adam S,
Can you please review my profile?

Abdul Karim's avatar
Abdul Karim S Community Member

Dear Adam,

It is amazing to see how detailed feedback you are providng to newbies. I would be grateful if you could have look at my profile as well. Here is the link to my freelancer profile: https://www.upwork.com/freelancers/~0135db37ebbf3208c5 

Muhammad's avatar
Muhammad M Community Member

Hello Adams

I know every profile checking is tough, but I will be very grateful if you review my profile.

 

https://www.upwork.com/freelancers/engr

 

Thanks

Md Raisul Islam Ch's avatar
Md Raisul Islam Ch N Community Member

Sure.

William T's avatar
William T C Community Member

Hey Md, please change your Settings to Public instead of Private. Currently nobody can view your Profile. Thanks!

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