Priyanka,
Hope I got your name right ... I'm not wearing my reading glasses.
First, welcome to Upwork.
Second ... your write-up is OK. It really seems, in general, like you could say more. Fashion is a very passionate field. I wonder if you don't have more to say about it that would convince me you know what you're talking about. Where did you train? What styles do you admire? Just a little more would help.
But here's the line that stopped me. You wrote:
"I will provide you with designs that will speak directly to your target customer, maximising your sales!"
Of course, that's the perfect thing to say. It really is. That's exactly what people want to hear. But it made me very suspicious.
So, I'm just challenging you ... can you write a sentence or two that validates that lofty statement? What's your track record? Have you maximized sales for someone before? Can you tell us something that, essentially, proves that sentence is true?
Now ... having said that ... the word "maximize" is very, very, very odd. It means there could not be any higher sales no matter what .... so it's kind of "overkilli" to use that word. More honestly, you might say "I helped improve sales." Maximize ... that's like saying "I got it perfect." You just need a slightly softer statement. You don't want to make promises you can't really keep up with ...
I do love the drawings ... and I know you can do this ... It's just my job to challenge you.
