Mar 14, 2023 09:07:16 AM Edited Apr 3, 2023 02:53:32 PM by Andrea G
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Apr 3, 2023 02:15:51 PM Edited Apr 3, 2023 02:16:38 PM by Tajamul H
Hey Kate, I have reviewed your account and here are some suggestions for you.
Thanks
Tajamul
Mar 30, 2023 12:43:33 AM by Mikhail I
This is just great information! Look at mine too. Thank you in advance. 👨🎓
Mar 30, 2023 02:46:22 AM by Dmytro D
Hi Mikhail. I advise you to take New to Upwork: Getting Started. Add some portfolio, Profile photo best practices, change the photo, edit the profile title, and profile overview. These parts start to learn first, there are examples there.
Apr 3, 2023 02:17:50 PM Edited Apr 3, 2023 02:18:28 PM by Tajamul H
Hey Mikhail, I have reviewed your account and here are some suggestions for you.
Thanks
Tajamul
Mar 30, 2023 02:14:01 AM by Narek Y
In my opinion it does not work. Vote for those who have not changed anything after that
Mar 30, 2023 02:23:35 AM by Haroon A
No one is reviewing my profile. What is the benefit of this?If no one is reviewing ??
My profile: https://www.upwork.com/freelancers/~019a716a81f088f9d9
Mar 30, 2023 02:33:40 AM by Haroon A
Can anyone please review my upwork profile?
https://www.upwork.com/freelancers/~019a716a81f088f9d9
Mar 30, 2023 07:36:29 AM by Anthony H
Haroon,
All of this should be deleted:
"Do you want to write emails, sales pages, and ad copy that brings Revenue—do you want to improve your ad copy conversions and boost revenue through a convertible copy? Are you tired of seeing your emails in the spam or promotional folder...
If your answer is "YES," then you're in the right place. People spend hours writing emails, sales pages, posts, landing pages, etc., which, according to them, are the best and contain everything that would force their readers to convert into their customers...but Are they right?
However, they still find their emails to be: 1. Less engaging 2. Less converting Because they do not know how to write copy that sells.
Being a copywriter....the main task is to sell through our words and mainly bring $$$ to your bank account... that is it. This can be done ONLY if you know the "PSYCHOLOGICAL TRIGGERS" that get people to CLICK and BUY your offer...
Do you want your customers to engage with your content? If yes, then message me!"
All of that is considered rhetorical. It tells people nothing new. They already know they need to find a copywriter or they wouldn't be reading your profile. And they don't want to be lectured to on how copywriting works.
Your two minute lecture doesn't tell them anything about you. That's what they want to hear about. They don't want to be told the ONLY way to do copywriting is through psychological triggers.
Tell them the stuff they don't know. Tell them about yourself and how effective your services are. They don't want to hear "Copywriting 101."
Mar 30, 2023 08:52:24 AM by Lana S
Yes please have someone review my profile. This is my first time. Thank you
Mar 30, 2023 03:51:16 PM Edited Mar 30, 2023 03:53:05 PM by Anthony H
Lana (from Brooklyn),
I don't know from your opening paragraph whether you are adversing a service that helps peopls looking for a job (interview skills, help with resumes and such) or whether you work for employers who are looking for workers. Maybe it's both, but I think you should clear that up.
Secondly, there are some points you could make much stronger. For example, you wrote, "Proven experience in successfully implementing cost effective recruitment process and seamless onboarding process."
So, to put it bluntly, if that's the case, then prove that to your readers. Give them something to work with. You have the gloss, but where is the evidence?
All you have to do is offer more spefics. "I worked with textile companies and reduced their recruiting costs by 10 percent." You can pick it up from there ... more specifics and less gloss will give your profile a lot more credibility.
You use words like "developing" and "managing." We all know what that means, but do we really? What do these words mean to you? Developing is comprised of actual steps, concrete actions. Tell us what they are. Managing looks like one thing in a prison and another thing in a hospital. So what specifically does managing entail from where you sit?
Like any other customer, an Upwork client wants to know what they are getting for their money. The more tangible and specific you can be the more you sound like an actual expert and the more comfortable they will be signing you on.
Mar 30, 2023 10:28:02 AM by Josue G
Hi,
Please help me to Review my profile.
I'm open to any comment wich can help me.
Thanks.
Mar 30, 2023 11:30:58 AM Edited Mar 30, 2023 11:31:44 AM by Randa M
Hello,
I will be grateful if you can review my profile
Regards
Randa
Mar 30, 2023 03:36:29 PM Edited Mar 30, 2023 03:38:29 PM by Anthony H
Allison,
You need more paragraphs, so the readers' eyes can rest. You wrote, "In the past my career .." and "I am excited ..." Those would be logical places to start new paragraphs.
The write up is great, but it lacks something. The three points to a great profile are establish yourself as an expert, be friendly and project confidence.
Your write up is very friendly. It also exudes confidence. But it doesn't make a strong case for you being an expert.
Just a few tweaks can push that across. For one, try to use the word expert somewhere. For another, write about previous successes. For another describe you craft with more of a hands-on type of sentence. In other words, describe tangible things like the styles you can produce. It helps to say, "My designs have been used for _____ and ____ and ____," which might be (coffee cups) and (advertisements) and (book covers).
Describing tangible things and past experinces helps you sound like you know what you're doing.
Anyway, you don't have to rewrite the thing .... you just need to push that expertise factor a little harder. In my humble option. (Oh, why? Good question: If you establish yourself as an expert, people will pay attention to what you have to say. If you don't establish yourself as an expert, then what you say doesn't carry any weight. That's why you get the expertise business established as soon as possible.)
Mar 30, 2023 07:00:25 PM by Rajat G
Respected ,
Pls can you review my profile because tried to outreach many times but not able to find 1 job opportunity
Regards Rajat
Mar 31, 2023 06:56:49 AM by Hakan C
i want to find a job and work i have a few debts and i couldn't pay my rent this month! please help me
Mar 31, 2023 10:13:37 AM by Syed Muhammad A
Hello,
I hope you are doing well. I am new on upwork please can you review my profile,
Thanks
Mar 31, 2023 10:38:26 AM by Mohsin A
Hi everyone
My name is Mohsin i am now to UPWORK
Can you review on my profile please
Mar 31, 2023 12:19:43 PM by Rawal D
Can someone review my Upwork profile and give valuable suggestions to what areas I need to work on?
Mar 31, 2023 12:36:22 PM by MD Ripon S
Hi,
I,m new in upwork so need help from you guys. Can any one help me?
Mar 31, 2023 12:49:54 PM Edited Mar 31, 2023 12:57:38 PM by Ahmad M
Dear Experienced Community Members!
I am writing to request your assistance with a profile review. As a member of this community, I greatly value the insights and expertise that you bring to the table. I am looking to improve my profile and would greatly appreciate any feedback or suggestions that you may have.
Right now I'm specifically struggling witht the fact that my prosoal are not beign viewed client. I'm looking for all possible reasons, mistakes, improvement that can fix this.
I am hoping to receive feedback on the clarity and effectiveness of my messaging, as well as any suggestions for optimizing my profile to better showcase my skills and accomplishments.
Regards,
Mujtaba
Mar 31, 2023 02:45:21 PM by Sijal N
I am new on upwork and i am continously bidding on project from a month but i am not getting any project please review my profile. Thanks
Mar 31, 2023 02:45:30 PM by Utpol C
As a new Upwork user, there are several fundamental steps you must take to begin securing job opportunities on the platform. These include composing job proposals to bid on projects, uploading your portfolio and past work, and ensuring your account is fully completed
Mar 31, 2023 05:45:50 PM by Muhiyadin A
Hello Upwork Community! As a new freelancer to Upwork, I kindly ask for your review of my profile and feedback on any areas that could use improvement. Please feel free to suggest changes that would make my profile more appealing to potential clients. Your input is highly appreciated, thank you!.
Mar 31, 2023 07:06:08 PM by Benard O
Hi Andrea
Can I please get feedback on my profile? thank you.
Regards
Ben
Mar 31, 2023 10:28:47 PM by Muhammad Saqib F
Can you review my profile and let me know if anything needs to be changed?