Sarah,
Hi. It’s a good start. But it needs more professionalism. (Is that really a word?)
Think in terms of services and what you are selling. Don’t say you’ve learned to be efficient, say you are efficient.
Later, when you talk about brochures, sell the services it takes to do that. More or less, in your own words, say, “I offer marketing expertise, writing, logo design, sales and branding services,” and things of that nature.
It’s not my field and I don’t know the skills or jargon, but some rules are universal. Sound friendly and competent. Err on the side of the superlative. Someone reading it should think, wow she’s friendly and she knows her craft. Really nail that niche.
