AMIR I wrote:
I would like some honest feedback.
Thank you in advance.
I am not sure in which country you are living but that does not make you a native speacker of the language. Your portfolio item makes is clear that you should not translate into French or English.
Hi, I am new at Upwork. Following in my profile link
Can someone please look into my profile and let me know how can I make it better?
I have submitted several proposals but haven't got any job yet.
Thank you so much in advance.
please check my profile and give me feedback. I started Upwork about 3 months ago got my first gig but since then I have been sending out tones of proposals with no response
Hello Mekail R, Welcome to UpWork!
I checked out your profile and I've got a couple of tips to make it better. First of all the pricing of your services is too small and looks cheap. I personally would start with at least $10/hour. The next thing I noticed was your profile description. In my opininion it has too much promises like (I will meet the deadline, I will provide a lot of things) and that simply looks like you are trying to justify why someone should order from you.
In my opinion a strong description should consist of your experience, past-works and why you are better and more unique than other sellers. Simply your profile is too generic and "Perfect" for a real person.
I hope that this was helpful