Your profile will not be approved. You have plagerized another Upworker's profile. You're not a native English Speaker.
Everything on your profile has to be true. You can't just copy someone else's stuff and call it your own.
No one can help you. You have to market your skills in your own way. You can't copy from someone else. If you really have these skills and you're serious about working here, you need to put everything in your own words.
This is a tough world to get started in and clients can pick out fakes within seconds of seeing a profile. They see one thing that's off or untrue they are moving on to the next person.
I can't tell you 100% it will be approved, but being honest about your skills helps a lot.