How to write a right and good proposal?!

[amali1412]

Hello all ...

I suffer from frustration, I registered here about three months ago, but so far I have not found a client, can you see my profile, and how to write a good proposal.
I did not get any work, are there people with the same problem as me?

I appreciate your interest and thank you

[agalus]

Honestly, I think you need more items in your portfolio. I wouldn't want to hire a design artist who has only created one logo, I'd want to see more examples of your work first. 

[amali1412]

Thank you for your interest, I will upload a lot of designs

[williambernal]

EA,

Welcome to UW.

You may want to take another closer pass at the copy on your profile. There are a number of basic errors (ex: "Expert of Logo and Branding" - "Logo and Branding Expert") that can be easily corrected/upgraded. At present your skills look marketable (although I personally have no expertise in your niche) but the copy language/grammar is a bit awkward, your formatting needs some clean-up/streamlining and the entirety of its presentation appears slightly amatuerish due to these basic, simple-to-fix flaws.

Best of luck!

[amali1412 · Accepted solution]

Thank you very much, I will reformulate it

[3289b694]

I basically have the same worries.
Would anyone kindly go through my profile and tell me where necessary adjustments are needed?

[f62ae82c]

Same thing applicable to me, can someone view my profile and tell me where there faults in my profile.

Thank you very much.