I think there are good things about your profile.
I like your focus.
I like your portfolio.
Definitely get rid of this paragraph:
"I’m new to Upwork, So I very much appreciate your consideration for me, and you will definitely have more than others. I would assist and with discounts or any other favours. You’ll have final results more than your expectations."
You don't need to tell people you are new to Upwork. They can guess that by the fact that you have such a short work history. It's not a plus.
I don't like your offer of discounts of favours. I don't think that helps you.