The first two lines of your general profile description is what all clients see right away. It's what initailly draws them to click on you. You're supposed to make it eye catching. I would take out the whole first sentence where you state your name and where you're from. The client can already see that so it'll be a little redundant to put it in the description. Also, you copied and pasted what you had on your general profile to your specialized Graphic Design profile. Try to personalize it if you can.