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Re: Need little help

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Polina S Member Since: Mar 1, 2019
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Hello guys! How can I get my 1st job here on upwork? Can anybody, please, advise me somethingSmiley Happy Thank you in advance!

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Martina P Member Since: Jul 11, 2018
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Polina S wrote:

Hello guys! How can I get my 1st job here on upwork? Can anybody, please, advise me somethingSmiley Happy Thank you in advance!


I like that you went for a very informal style of communication to make a connection with a potential client. I don't like that you completely miss the mark and come across to me as - forgive me - juvenile.

Do a great deal of research of other freelancers that offer the same skills, learn from them, and present as friendly, nice, but/and very very competent.  

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Polina S Member Since: Mar 1, 2019
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Thank you Mrs. Martina!

This is little ruff, but you are right. I accept it as a solution as well, just started seriously learning this platform a few days ago. Probably am too impatient and doing fast and stupid moves.

 

I appreciate your words and will definitely do what you advised.

Kind regards

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Martina P Member Since: Jul 11, 2018
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Polina S wrote:

Thank you Mrs. Martina!

This is little ruff, but you are right. I accept it as a solution as well, just started seriously learning this platform a few days ago. Probably am too impatient and doing fast and stupid moves.

 

I appreciate your words and will definitely do what you advised.

Kind regards


Welcome. So leave everything out about that you are new to the platform, what you think of the platform, etc., and put in a good structure and natural flow of your text. 

Ace Contributor
Polina S Member Since: Mar 1, 2019
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Dear Mrs. Martina,

 

I will greatly appreciate if you could see the changes I have made and give me your feedback.

 

Thank You in advance

 

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Preston H Member Since: Nov 24, 2014
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Welcome. This is what you're looking for:

 

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Polina S Member Since: Mar 1, 2019
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Thank you mr. Preston!

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