Not Getting Replies on my Proposals / Struggling as a beginner

[#1]

Hey

I have seen alot of discussions on topics and then upwork experts respond back to them with their precious tips to make their profile better
I have spend almost 60 connects with no invites to interviews
Please any expert just have a look at my profile and let me do if i am doing anything wrong , IT will TAKE A MINUTE FOR YOU 🙂

Thanks Alot

[#2]

I'm vary of people promising to be available 24/7.

[#3]

Thanks alot for your Reply

You mean i shouldnt include this in my profile right ?

Thanks again 🙂

[#4]

Hi Tayyab,

Welcome to Upwork and thank you for your message! I want to start by applauding the formatting of your profile and your use of special characters. This makes your profile look organized and unique! I do have a few suggestions:

• The beginning of your profile overview displays in prospective client search results. So, your first sentence should include clear, relevant information about your primary skill sets and expertise. Right now, this sentence is confusing. It looks like something may be missing. Perhaps you are trying to address the profile to Amazon sellers?
• Your written English skills are strong and you are easy to understand. However, I did see a few minor errors. If you'd like to add extra polish, you might want to consider using Grammarly (from Grammarly.com). I use this myself and really like it because it's free and it offers a Chrome add-on so it works in webmail, messages, proposals, and more. Along with the Overview, there is a typo in your Employment History title.

I also have a couple of other resources that I think might help:

• Upwork Profiles: Why a Great Title and Overview Can Make a Difference
• How to Create a Proposal That Wins Jobs

I hope this helps!