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As an aside: Reviewing books on Amazon for payment is a serious violation of Amazon's terms of services and Upwork's.
Please do NOT do that again. Ever.
It is entirely unacceptable on too many levels (even if it was an "honest" review.)
@Alex M wrote:
Could anyone take a look at my profile? I’ve been working so hard on it the past few weeks, and I don’t think I’m gaining any traction. I’ve also been working hard on my proposals. Any and all suggestions are welcome. I really want to get some jobs—I love what I do and really want to do it. As a proofreader/editor/beta reader, I feel like it’s really hard to display my portfolio since it’s not a visual field of work... I don’t know. But I’d appreciate any advice
I think it's really good, a few minor things: Don't start every paragraph with an "I", and don't promise to "start on your text immediately". That will not be possible once you are flooded with jobs .... it makes you sound as if you have nothing to do.....
Few suggestions from my part along with the pieces of advice already given:
All the best!