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Cat L Member Since: Jun 19, 2019
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Hi all,
I’m not having any luck obtaining jobs yet. Would anyone be willing to check out my profile to see what I can fix to make it more appealing?

Thanks!
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Nichola L Member Since: Mar 13, 2015
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Cat, 

 

There really is nothing wrong with your overview, except the first line. Keep "passion" for other areas of your life. "With over thirteen years in corporate accounting, I have found my passion to be in small business." I suggest something like: "I have over thirteen years in corporate accounting and now specialize in small businesses.

(In your proposals leave out passion - even if the client demands it. Also do not go for bottom-feeder clients just to get your foot in the door.)

 

If you can show a portfolio so much the better, even if this is simply proof of your certification. 

 

This is only my take on it and I am sure others will give their views too. 

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