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Review my profile please

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Jitinder P Member Since: Jan 26, 2017
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Robin H Member Since: May 28, 2019
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Your title should start with Graphic Designer specializing in logos and websites.  Remove your name.  It is already listed.  Add your skills on top.  Make the first two lines stand out as that is what a client sees when they do a search.  

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Jitinder P Member Since: Jan 26, 2017
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I have make some changes into my profile please review

Robin H

 

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Robin H Member Since: May 28, 2019
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Jitinder P wrote:

I have make some changes into my profile please review

Robin H

 


It still needs work.  You are a Graphic Designer Specializing in Logo & Websites.  However, that is not that compelling and mirrors thousands of other profiles.  Jazz it up.  Research other top rated freelancers and see what stands out to you.  Then personalize your own.

 

Again, the first two lines are what stands out.  You have a quote and then nothing.  Is this what you want to share as the first thing a potential client reads about you?  Use the real estate wisely.  

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John B Member Since: Aug 20, 2015
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Hello.  I tend toward less gushy and more direct comments. All honest comments are good ones, however.

Let's start, ground up.

Your profile reads like you are desperate.  Unlimited revisions, willing to work 50 to 60 hours a week.   I understand that is your way of saying "all in, I'll do what is necessary".  That is also tailor-made to attract clients who will abuse you and indicates a mentality of taking whatever is handed out.  You are better than this. 


There are grammar errors in the profile to fix.  India-based resources have it hard enough with prospective clients who worry about communication skills.  Your profile must be grammarian-class perfect so that concern is not advanced further than need be.

 

I can't see your portfolio.  Hopefully it is stronger than your profile.

Now get yourself organized in thinking.  You are competing with a world of contractors now.  Some of them make it their sole mission in life to win work that could otherwise be yours.  Be a competitor, shore up your profile, exhibit strong business mindsets and go win some work worthy of your talent and ambition.

 

 

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Jitinder P Member Since: Jan 26, 2017
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Thank you John B for your precious time to helping me 

My portfolio is public and i am working on it , i will upload my latest work soon,

I have make some changes into my profile please review

John B

 

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John B Member Since: Aug 20, 2015
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Good. **edited for Community Guidelines**

There are two stages in Upwork success.  Being a strong to brilliant delivery professional.  And convincing people you are a strong to brilliant delivery professional.

I'd like you to put your full heart and mind into this work.  Do this for yourself.  It is time to sparkle in presenting yourself.  Email me privately when you are ready for an ally-class dialog about the outcomes.

We cannot fail, when we do not fail trying.

John.

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Amanda L Member Since: Jan 23, 2018
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Remove the quote from your review since your reviews are already visible just below it. Also, the spacing and punctuation are all wonky - technically incorrect. Not sure how it looks to be a graphic designer and have your profile with random stray periods and commas everywhere. 

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Preston H Member Since: Nov 24, 2014
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Unlimited revisions?

If I was hiring freelancers to work for a business I owned I would certainly not waste my time and money with someone like that.

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John B Member Since: Aug 20, 2015
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Preston has one of the most advanced hiring profiles on this system.  To accompany one of the most advanced and successful Upwork careers on the system.  When he speaks, it is good to listen.

"Unlimited revisions" =s "willing to do what is necessary to ensure client success.

We all provide unlimited revisions in our profession, Preston.  We all do what is necessary for our (good, appropriately positioned) clients to succeed.  The young man is simply expressing his will to succeed, but way to bluntly so.

I would hire someone who wrote that, because I would see a will that cannot be broken to deliver success to my project.  Then I could counsel him to not say it like that.

Just a position of consideration.

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