Review of my profile

[adamsjessica33]

Hello! Is there somewhere in the community forum where members review each other's profiles? I just completed mine and sent out a few proposals, but the more I read it seems that my profile might need some work. Would love to hear any feedback. Thanks!

[bud-scannavino]

Hi Jessica, I read through your profile as you asked. It strikes me there are two aspects that can really be improved.

First, It is too general. Specific and short descriptions will grab the reader's attention better. Second, and most importantly, it is focused on you. It would be better to focus on the client and what benefits he can expect from hiring you.

Hope that helps. Good luck, Bud