Aug 6, 2020 10:51:19 AM Edited Dec 31, 2020 06:06:19 AM by Mike J
Jan 13, 2021 06:05:26 AM by Mike J
Hi Therese,
Thank you for your message! I reviewed your profile and have some suggestions:
Your profile overview is short compared to the average. Upwork’s research shows clients see it as a positive signal if the profile is well written and comprehensive. Therefore, consider crafting your overview as a pitch to prospective clients.
Your written English skills are strong and you are easy to understand. However, I did see a few minor errors. If you'd like to add extra polish, you might want to consider using Grammarly. I use this myself and really like it because it's free and it offers a Chrome add-on so it works in webmail, messages, proposals, and more.
To give a clear impression you’re the person the client wants to talk to, here are some additional tips for writing a great Overview.
I hope this helps!
Sep 14, 2020 07:24:27 AM by Mike J
Hi Sohaib,
Thank you for your message. I reviewed your profile and see that it is largely just a list. While bulleted lists can help to organize an Overview, using only a list makes your profile overview difficult to quickly scan and understand what your primary services and experiences are. It might help to organize it with paragraphs: for example, have your introduction paragraph, a separate paragraph for skills, and one for experience. Focus on how you can help clients achieve their goals. For example, expand on who you are, the services you offer, and what you’re most passionate about. Use caution with adding lists of skills with few to no related work examples because clients may question the sincerity of your skills list.
I hope this helps!
Nov 11, 2020 08:48:23 PM by Md Rakib H
Hi Mike J, I want you to review my profile as well. And let me know if needs to fix any error you find.
Thanks
Rakib
Nov 20, 2020 08:44:31 AM by Mike J
Hi Rakib,
I have reviewed your profile and have some suggestions:
Your profile overview is short compared to the average. Upwork’s research shows clients see it as a positive signal if the profile is well written and comprehensive. Therefore, consider crafting your overview as a pitch to prospective clients.
Your written English skills are strong and you are easy to understand. However, I did see a few minor errors. If you'd like to add extra polish, you might want to consider using Grammarly. I use this myself and really like it because it's free and it offers a Chrome add-on so it works in webmail, messages, proposals, and more.
I hope this helps!
Dec 22, 2020 11:21:38 PM Edited Dec 22, 2020 11:24:18 PM by Aleksandar D
Hello Mike,
I need your help in setting profile and getting more jobs by proposals.
Regards,
Usman **Edited for Community Guidelines**
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