new freelancer in trouble, i wanna ask for help

[lesterb22]

So i'm new to upwork , i updated my profile and so submitted for 16+ proposal. none of the accept me or even wanna try what i really can do please help me because out of 16 proposal none even sent me an invite or interview. and please check out my profile be honest and share your opinion on what i would want to change or to add.  https://www.upwork.com/freelancers/~0105e379210ba5dea9 

i badly need job since i always stay here at home while studying and i want to make use of my talent , explore and learn more. thank you

[mystudiomke]

Hi Lester,

I have reviewed your profile. Right away your summary needs some rewording and spell cheking. A few questions to ask yourself is what make you unique from other programmers? Another key point is that you right away went into your skills instead of introducing yourself. Remenber that the client is a human and they want to work with someone who will do a great job but also be able to connect with that person. See link below for some upwork proposal aid.

https://freelancetowin.com/upwork-proposal-mistakes/

Lastly, dont sell yourself short with your last sentence 🙂

Hope that helps.

[mwiggenhorn]

1. Lester, the client initially only sees the first two or three lines of your profile.  (Same thing is true of your proposal).  Make that count!  Also, every sentence in your profile begins with the word "I".  Re-write it to make it more interesting.

[ilyas2010]

Bring unique things to your profile! Competition is too much here so you want to deliver something best and perfect!