why client can't view my proposal?

[#1]

Hello Adnan A,

Kindly review my proposals for me and suggest improvements to it. Thank you

Joshua Omondi

Freelancer

[#2]

where is your proposal

[#3]

Hello Adnan A.

Here is my profile https://www.upwork.com/freelancers/~016b8b89e8c6cc0b1b

[#4]

please update your profile and portfolio.

[#5]

They can view it. They just decide not to. 

[#6]

is there anything wrong with my proposal writing?

[#7]

Probably.