Welcome
First, read some of the other new comers who have had their profiles examined.
Second, read all the hints on how to survive as a freelancer
Third, don't think this will generate millions of dollars by just being here, it takes hard work to promote yourself
Fourth, watch out for scammers and questionable projects. They are out to get you.
Now, some specfics.
First, check out this link on how to present you image photo. There are several aspects where you could do much better. It is a small thing, but so many freelancers don't seem to care or take the time to understand all the parts of selling yourself. https://www.upwork.com/resources/how-to-guide-perfect-profile-picture#:~:text=Upwork%20profile%20pic...
Second, [my broken record]. Make your profile tell why you can help your client, not who you are. Try to quantify benefits to the customer, like x% increased productivty to last set of clients, helped client produce outstanding marketing campaign, etc. Too many freelancers, in my opinion, just tell why they have great credentials. Lots of freelancers have great credentials, you need to set yourself apart from them.
This is a tough place to be, but you just have to try your harderest and not be discouraged. It may not be the place for you or it may make you work life great.
Good luck.
