Need Profile Feedback

[492f5790]

Good Day to you all, 

Would appreciate very much your help giving me your feed back for my profile 

Regards

Hala 

[allpurposewriter]

Hala,

The focus of a profile is the service or services that you are selling. You don't even say what this (or these) might be.

Figure out the service you are selling and go from there.

Good luck.