Feedback on my profile

[gonscla]

Hi!

I would appreciate any feedback, advice, recommendation, tips, on how to improve my profile so to make it attractive, more effective and professional.

Many thanks!

[robin_hyman]

Remove the "hi".  Clients see the first 2-3 lines of your profile in search so make sure they count.  Also, you pride yourself on great grammar and writing skills, yet I see mistakes in your profile (ex: run-ons, incorrect use of commas).

You're a English to Spanish Translator.  Make sure that is in your header.  

Good luck!

[gonscla]

Thanks, I'll correct that!