Honest feedback:
If you truly have an MS in engineering and experience working with computers, I would consider creating profiles that focus on engineering and tech and try offering those services. I think when a client sees your degree + a job as a computer operator, it doesn't make much sense to them that you are trying to do 'data entry' and writing. Also, in your employment history, it doesn't really look great to go from a 'computer operator' to an 'office assistant', as that's basically a demotion. I would consider taking that office assistant thing off of there and add a description for the 'computer operator' job explaining what you did and what technologies you used.
The data entry, video editing, and writer fields on Upwork are EXTREMELY competitive, and most clients are unlikely to be interested if your background doesn't suggest expertise in those areas. Your intro says "I've been doing this for a while now. " but there is nothing on your profile to support this claim. There are items in the portfolio, but no information on WHEN and where you did these projects. Clients don't like vague stuff like "for a while now" or "an offline client": You should be able to say specifically how many years and be able to PROVE it with listings of past projects/jobs related to the areas where you are claiming to have experience in those areas. After all, if you have a degree in an unrelated field like Electrical Engineering, it is up to you to PROVE to the client you really have expertise in writing, video editing, etc. If I were a client viewing that profile, I would not be convinced in the least with vague claims like "doing this for a while now" and no supporting employment history or project listings to prove it.
More honest feedback: You might have better luck offering IT services or engineering expertise on Upwork, which is less competitive and usually pays much more. To most clients, it's simply not going to make sense that somebody went through the trouble to earn an electrical engineering degree, and then just randomly decided to go into video editing and doing data entry stuff instead.
You also don't need to 'thank' people for 'visiting' your profile: It's a profile, not an ecommerce checkout page, so there is no need to 'thank' people for 'stopping by'. It also suggests that you don't get many 'visitors' when you include a statement like that.
Lastly: I'd recommend REMOVING all that "***" stuff and emojis from the intros on your specialized profiles. They look unprofessional and 'spam'-like to many clients. Just keep the intro clean and professional and state what you can offer and leave it at that. There's no need for all the "*******" and :white_heavy_check_mark: stuff all over the place. You can use regularly 'bullets' to make itemized 'points' instead of big green check marks etc.
I would recommend really cleaning up the profile before submitting anymore proposals and spending any more connects. The 'new to upwork' section has plenty of information on what a professional profile SHOULD look like. I'd recommend spending some time reading it and fixing the profile first.
