Profile Review

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Hello Upwork! I am new to the platform and am actively sending proposals. I would really appreciate it if someone who is successful on the platform could review my profile and give me some constructive feedback.  Looking to bring my husband home from his crappy job so I really need to make this work.  Thanks for your help

[mwiggenhorn]

Initially, the client only sees the first two or three lines of your profile.  I would move your third paragraph up to the top.  Your profile needs to highlight your expertise and experience before you came to Upwork (later, revising it to reflect Upwork experience as well).  More about what specific skills that you have in various styles (Chicago, Blue Book, etc.) would help.

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Thank you, Mary.  I will definitely give that a go.  I appreciate the help.