Introduction

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My name is Abdullah Ajibola. I am a software Engineer. I create responsive websites for clients with over three years experience. I always work to meet my client goal that is why I always put good communication first between me and my client. I will love to explore and interact with fellow software Engineer on this platform. My work Sample attached below.

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First of all, the photo must be of you, nothing else is allowed.

Your presentation, you are missing the first two lines, which are the ones you should use to attract the client's attention (it is the only thing they will see without opening your profile)
You have the first line occupied with a word that is not necessary, and the second is a blank space.
The sentences are separated by double space and take up too much for nothing.

I see a lot of "me, me" and little "you", tell the client what you can do for them.
A couple of links, read everything, links included:
- https://community.upwork.com/t5/Freelancers/To-all-freelancers-looking-for-help/m-p/1230482#M734358

- https://community.upwork.com/t5/Community-Blog/Top-Red-Flags-for-Scams-From-Community-Member-Wes-C/b...

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OK got it